高考英语百日训练之应用文写作(55)含答案详解

【题文】

假定你是某学校的学生会主席。最近，你发现有些学生经常以零食代替正餐。请你代表学生会用英语写一封倡议书，呼吁同学们养成健康的饮食习惯。 注意：1、词数100左右；2、开头和结尾已给出，但不计人总词数。 Dear friends

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Student Union

【答案】 Dear friends,

Some students in our school have the habit of eating snacks instead of meals, which is harmful to their health. We’d like to call on all students to develop healthy eating habits.

As we all know, if we eat snacks frequently, the chemicals they contain will build up inside our body and harm our body. Besides, snacks don’t provide enough nutrients that our body needs to function well for the whole day. Therefore, we would call on you to take meals instead of snacks.

Let’s have a healthy diet from now on , Let’s eat more fruit and vegetables every day to prevent diseases so that we can keep healthy.

Student Council

【解析】

本文是一篇倡议书，是应用文的一种。题目常会给出标题、称呼、结尾、落款四部分，而考生只需完成正文。通常用将来时和一般现在时。本文分三段，首先引出倡议目的，发现有些学生经常以零食代替正餐，呼吁同学们养成健康的饮食习惯。然后在第二段点明零食代替正餐的危害，最后发出号召，从今以后每天多吃水果和蔬菜，保持健康体魄。

本文亮点：1、开门见山指出写作目的，陈述倡议的内容，呼吁同学们养成良好的饮食习惯。2、语气委婉中肯，使对方容易接受，如：没有大量使用比较生硬的祈使句或者you should…等，而是转换不同的句型，使语言丰富，如 We’d like to ….，We would call on you to …，Let’s have… 。3、as we all know…，besides，连接词和过渡语应用恰当，使文章紧凑连贯。如：therefore等等。 名师点睛：

在写作中恰当地使用连接词，会使文章过渡自然，连贯通顺，一气呵成。例如本文是用于按分析法展开的段落的，用到的连接词如：as we all know…，besides，therefore等等。其他常用的连接词和过渡词还有：first; second; etc. now; for this purpose; but; as a result; furthermore; finally; at last; moreover; also; therefore; likewise; another; for example; next; yet; for instance; on the contrary; once; in addition; in summary; such; in this case; on the other hand; then; otherwise; in conclusion; thus; in closing 等等。

【标题】江西省九江市2016-2017学年高一下学期期末考试英语试题 【结束】