首段写作方法——对比
首先描述现象，其次对比以前怎么怎么样，最后原因过渡句
现象句模板
1.A public debate has arisen concerning….
2.Recently,the problem of…has aroused people’s concern
3.it should come as no surprise to learn that …
4.one of the most serious problems many people talk about centers on…
5. …is a new and bitter truth we must learn to face.
More and more 替换
An accumulating number of
A gathering number of
An increasing number of
A mushrooming number of
a considerable number of
a great deal of
vast quantity of大量的
原因过渡模板
Why?There are a number of factors accounting for this phenomenon.
Many reasons should be responsible for this unpleasant situation
What is to account for this?Now let me enumerate the reasons in the following.
Nowadays,one of the most serious problems many people talk about centers on accumulating number of college students are confronted with the increasing amount of pressure and competition.But just decade ago,hardly had any university students experienced this kind of tension.What brings this result?The main reason rests with the following aspects.
go to 的替换
swarm into,pour into,crow into表急迫的心情冲入
step into表不想去
citizen公民 pupil学生，未成年人 inhabitant居民，住户 entrepreneur企业家
Contemporarily,a new and bitter truth we must learn to face is that the relationship between neighbors is get worse.However,just decades ago,the neighborhood relationship in china was quite close.The deep root of this phenomenon lies in the following aspects.
however/but 的替换
1,on the contrary,reversely,by contrast
2.fortunately,unfortunately.
3.ugly as it was
4.the other side of the picture is quite opposite.
没有过去，不能与过去进行对比，使用数据法
Nowadays,it should come as no surprise to learn that an accumulating number of people like \"super-girl show\".
It should come as no surprise to learn that “super-girl show” exerts a peculiar fascination on an accumulating number of audience,esp. on young generation.
It should come as no surprise to learn that “super-girl show”,for my own part ,exerts a peculiar fascination on an accumulating number of audience,esp. on young generation.
数据模板(第二句话)
From a close study,we learned that..
According to a survey conducted among a group of people,…
It should come as no surprise to learn that “super-girl show”,for my own part ,exerts a peculiar fascination on an accumulating number of audience,esp. on young generation.According to a statistics,the audience rating is up to 47% high.What is to an account for this?Now let me enumerate the reasons in the following.
Want to替换
Would rather,tend to,be eager to,be tempted to,be willing to
4大黄金副词
Minimally最低限度地，最低程度地 12%minimally
Approximately近似地，大约地 替换nearly
Overwhelmingly压倒地，无法抵抗地 替代very overwhelmingly stressful=very stressful
Contemporarily同时期地，同时代地 替代now，nowadays
越来越多学生选择出国留学
Never before in history has the issue of studying abroad been more popular than now.A brief inquiry demonstrates that more than 12.32% of high school students went abroad for further studies.And nearly 54.12% students want to study in overseas countries.Why?Couple of factors gave rise to this tendency nowadays.
Never before in history has the issue of studying abroad been more evident than now.A brief inquiry demonstrates that minimally 12.32% of high school students poured into countries,such as US and UK,for further studies.And approximately
54.12%
students
are
inclined
to
study
in
overseas
countries.Why?Couple of factors gave rise to this tendency nowadays.
越来越多的父母给孩子找家教
Recent years have been a tendency that parents in growing numbers would rather find private tutors for their children.According to a survey conducted among a group of people,approximately 53% of the primary school pupils have their private tutors.
危害性过渡句，名言警句
There is no doubt that it had exerted a great detriment on us.
It is known to to all that…are dangerous harmful to both the society and the individual.
Every advantages has its disadvantages.
Every coin has 2 sides.
All rose have thorns/No garden is without weeds.
表明观点：替换think
assume argue hold claim suggest in my opinon
利弊衔接句
As far as I am concerned,I trust the disadvantage exceed the advantages.
It does more harm than good to…
Recent years have been a tendency that parents in growing numbers would rather find private tutors for their children.According to a survey conducted among a group of people,approximately 53% of the primary school pupils have
their private tutors. Every advantages has its disadvantages.Yet in my opion,it does more harm than good to school pupils.
网瘾问题越来越严重
There is no denying the fact that internet addiction is an extremely serious problem.All reliable information points to the fact approximately 54.12% of netizens spent minimally 30hours a week on internet.There is no doubt that it had exerted a great detriment on us.
越来越多人觉得英语教育失败，学生根本无法和外国人交流
Nowadays,people in growing number are being to complain that college English education is quite a failure in China.A recent investigation shows that approximately 32.53% of graduates can’t communicate with foreigners,let alone write in English.Several factors spawned this phenomenon.
Let alone do sth. =not to mention doing sth更别提做某事
A recent investigation shows that hardly can any, approximately 32.53% of graduates, communication with foreigners, let alone write in English.
解释话语
1写出话语2白话文解释3过渡
Hardly can anyone things perfectly
解释：The saying aims at informing us of a truth that
过渡：There are sufficient reasons and evidence to testify the righteousness of my understanding.
描述图画
We can see from the illustration there is a father talking to his daughter.In the conversation,the dad asks his daughter “how was school today?” while his daughter just answers “You can read all about it on my blog”.This phenomenon demonstrates that internet communication has changed the traditional face to face communication.
描述图表 (1描述图表的趋势2具体解释图表3过渡)
Reading this chart,we can find that the average number of hours a student spends on the computer week has increased sharply.According to the statistic of the chart,in 1990,it was less than 2 hours;and in 1995,it increased to almost 4 hours;while in 2000,the number soared to 20 hours.Obviously,students tend to use computers more and more nowadays.The reasons are listed as follows.
第二段
1.One of the most common factors is…/…is also responsible for the
problem.Another contributing factor is…Perhaps the primary factor is…
2.On the one side,…On the other side,…Furthermore,…
3.Initially(开始，最初),…What’s worse,…What’s worst,…
4.For one thing…For another thing…what’s more…
You will cease to come if you failed to find the books you need.
An overwhelming majority of+n 大多数 =most of
Be more likely to do更容易做某事
Used to do过去习惯于做某事
Be used to doing现在习惯于做某事
Get used to doing未来习惯于做某事
influence 不存在好影响和坏影响之分
reverberation, impact 好的影响
detriment 坏的影响
第三段
校园或普通问题
As the salt of this world,college students should be fully aware of(意识到，知道) the important role studying plays in modern society.Therefore,they should never stop studying. We should also advocate to library authorities the importance of updating books so that an increasing number of teenagers can enjoy a happy life.
社会问题
It’s imperative(必要的，不可避免的) for us to take severe measures to put it on hold.For one thing,we must appeal to authorities(权威) to launch strict laws to control internet crime.For another thing,we should enhance(提高，加强) people’s awareness that rational use of internet is important for us.Only in this way can we have a bright future.
观点表述
We cannot assert(声称，断言) whether this trend is good or not,for my own part,I bear no prejudices（成见，偏见） against it like some critics did.But it’s advisable（明智的） to give a correct guidance to the wholesome（有益健康的，健全的） development of entertaining programs.
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